Finally managed to finish ireflect proposal, a tale about a young lady named Snow. It's not how I originally visioned it to end, but I think/hope I have done it some small justice. I really liked Snows inner dialogue, she is youthful, witty and clearly selfish.
I wasn't on the books to have Prince enter but I thought Snow's chapter ended on a high note. She has come tot he conclusion that she has fallen in love with Prince, and I had intended to have a chapter where she goes about 'fixing' the minor details of her image i.e. wearing proper female attire, and I thought about her inner struggle to deal with the foreign feelings in a comedic clumsy manner.
Prince's dialogue seemed a little more appealing as he introduces himself as someone who has quite snobbish mannerisms. So to counteract Snows fluffy dialogue, I wanted Prince's to be a bipolar of her later inner dialogue where she realizes her true feelings. Prince appears normal at first, but then he turns and his inner dialogue becomes darker, with an evil twist and cruel intentions in mind.
This final entry for ireflect has been particularly hard, because I can see why I have had minimal feedback from peers. My work produced thus far plays no bearing on what I know I can do. I am just really disappointed because I know I can do better, I will just have to try harder next year. I've managed to place feedback on a few proposals though. Thanks to Farish and Shay I've fixed minor errors and as for Farish wanting to know the outcome of Snow, I have left the ending unfinished for his own interpretation of an ending.
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